Original unseen source-based paper. Read all supplied selections before answering. Complete it independently, then discuss the separate marking guide; written answers require human review.
12 questions · 24 points · suggested 60 minutes
Student instructions
Use only this paper, its supplied selections and the permitted reference note below. Keep the answer key closed.
Give reading titles and short recognizable details; digital page numbers are not required.
For a developed 6-mark response, aim for roughly 120–180 words with evidence and explanation. Short questions can be answered in 2–4 sentences.
For accessibility, a parent may read directions aloud or transcribe an oral answer without adding content. Record accommodations and any help supplied.
The Garden Gate
Original unseen fiction written for this paper.
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Leila planned to count how many people entered the community garden. She placed a counter at the main gate and announced that the new beds had attracted only six visitors.
2
Owen showed her a smaller entrance on the other side, used by people coming from the bus stop. Her counter could not see it. Leila walked the paths before deciding where the next count should happen.
3
In her report, she changed “only six people visited” to “six entries were recorded at the main gate.” She kept a blank column for the other entrance. The blank did not answer the question, but it kept the unanswered part visible.
A Different Count
Original unseen poem written for this paper.
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We set a bell beside one gate
and count the sound as all who wait.
Beyond the wall another tread
moves softly past the flower bed.
A Changed Heading
Original unseen dramatic scene written for this paper.
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ARI: The bell rang six times. That is everyone.
[Bo points to a second path.]
BO: Everyone on this path?
ARI: I did not watch that one.
[Ari draws another column, leaving it empty.]
Survey and Trial Records
Explicitly fictional analytical evidence for this paper.
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In this fictional garden case, fifteen of twenty volunteers favored an extra open session. The caretaker asked for a watering rota. A trial counted eight visitors in one session and fourteen in another. Harvest yield and wellbeing were not measured.
Permitted conventions
BCE/CE dates use no year 0. A quotation repeats exact wording; a paraphrase still needs source credit. Fictional cases are labeled and must not be reported as genuine historical or measured evidence.
Coverage and marks
Chapter
Questions
Points
Reading Literature
1, 2
4
Poetry, Drama & Whole-Book Reading
3, 4
4
Reading Informational Text
5, 6
4
Writing
7, 8
4
Language & Vocabulary
9, 10
4
Research, Media, Discussion & Presentation
11, 12
4
Parent / teacher marking guide
Award the listed marks for demonstrated criteria; accept another well-supported response. Do not award marks solely for agreement with the model.
For each written answer, mark each listed criterion 0 or 1 and record a short reason. Total score is a diagnostic record, not automatic evidence that the whole year’s work is secure.
Discuss errors and require a corrected response to a new or changed case. Keep the paper, original answers, marking notes and correction in the portfolio.
Question 1 · 1 point
Which statement best explains the development in The Garden Gate?
The character revises the meaning of a limited record after noticing excluded information.
The character proves that every number is false.
The character abandons evidence altogether.
The ending establishes complete knowledge of every person.
Worked answer
The character revises the meaning of a limited record after noticing excluded information.
The character revises the meaning of a limited record after noticing excluded information.
1 point for the correct objective answer; no written-method marks for this item.
Question 2 · 3 points
Using The Garden Gate, explain how a change in action develops an idea. Give two separated details and qualify your conclusion.
Worked answer
The character changes from treating one record as complete to identifying what it leaves out. In The Garden Gate, the initial conclusion goes beyond what was counted, while the ending preserves the data and changes the scope. The intervening discovery supplies a reason for revision. The text supports a theme about learning to question a measure, without claiming that the revised record includes every possible person.
The character changes from treating one record as complete to identifying what it leaves out. In The Garden Gate, the initial conclusion goes beyond what was counted, while the ending preserves the data and changes the scope. The intervening discovery supplies a reason for revision. The text supports a theme about learning to question a measure, without claiming that the revised record includes every possible person.
Marking criteria
Make an accurate claim that answers this question.
Locate relevant source evidence or identify the specified grammatical structure.
Explain the link between the evidence or structure and the conclusion.
Question 3 · 1 point
Which statement about the poem and scene is best supported?
The poem supplies a reliable historical census.
The poem uses a contrast, while the scene makes a revised record visible through action.
Stage directions reveal every character’s private thoughts.
Both speakers must express the author’s personal experiences.
Worked answer
The poem uses a contrast, while the scene makes a revised record visible through action.
The poem uses a contrast, while the scene makes a revised record visible through action.
1 point for the correct objective answer; no written-method marks for this item.
Question 4 · 3 points
Compare how the poem and scene question a conclusion. Use one language choice and one stage direction.
Worked answer
The poem contrasts a limited signal with activity beyond what it records. The scene makes a challenge and a changed heading or column visible in action. The different forms develop a common question about what a record can establish. Neither proves that all counting is useless; the specific words and action support a limited criticism.
The poem contrasts a limited signal with activity beyond what it records. The scene makes a challenge and a changed heading or column visible in action. The different forms develop a common question about what a record can establish. Neither proves that all counting is useless; the specific words and action support a limited criticism.
Marking criteria
Make an accurate claim that answers this question.
Locate relevant source evidence or identify the specified grammatical structure.
Explain the link between the evidence or structure and the conclusion.
Question 5 · 1 point
Which conclusion can Survey and Trial Records establish?
Every resident supports the proposal.
The trial proves an unmeasured learning or wellbeing improvement.
The stated respondents expressed a preference; the trial recorded the named outcome in specified sessions.
The survey provides a complete count of all users.
Worked answer
The stated respondents expressed a preference; the trial recorded the named outcome in specified sessions.
The stated respondents expressed a preference; the trial recorded the named outcome in specified sessions.
1 point for the correct objective answer; no written-method marks for this item.
Question 6 · 3 points
Write an objective summary of Survey and Trial Records. Explain the denominator and distinguish measured and unmeasured outcomes.
Worked answer
In this fictional garden case, fifteen of twenty volunteers favored an extra open session. The caretaker asked for a watering rota. A trial counted eight visitors in one session and fourteen in another. Harvest yield and wellbeing were not measured. An objective summary attributes these fictional observations to the packet, keeps the surveyed group distinct from the whole population and does not claim achievement, wellbeing or an uncounted total was measured.
In this fictional garden case, fifteen of twenty volunteers favored an extra open session. The caretaker asked for a watering rota. A trial counted eight visitors in one session and fourteen in another. Harvest yield and wellbeing were not measured. An objective summary attributes these fictional observations to the packet, keeps the surveyed group distinct from the whole population and does not claim achievement, wellbeing or an uncounted total was measured.
Marking criteria
Make an accurate claim that answers this question.
Locate relevant source evidence or identify the specified grammatical structure.
Explain the link between the evidence or structure and the conclusion.
Question 7 · 1 point
Which revision makes the recommendation most defensible?
Promise universal improvement from the small preference survey.
Ignore the supervisor’s requirement.
Treat disagreement as evidence of bad character.
Recommend a supervised trial with a specified measure, while acknowledging what is not yet known.
Worked answer
Recommend a supervised trial with a specified measure, while acknowledging what is not yet known.
Recommend a supervised trial with a specified measure, while acknowledging what is not yet known.
1 point for the correct objective answer; no written-method marks for this item.
Question 8 · 3 points
Write a proposal using Survey and Trial Records. Use two details, answer the supervision or maintenance concern and explain one limit.
Worked answer
A bounded trial is supported by the stated interest and the existing session records, provided the named operational condition is met. Identify who provides supervision or maintenance and what each session will record. Preference and session use do not establish a broader benefit, so a stronger outcome claim requires a suitable evaluation. Quote the packet’s actual group and numbers rather than replacing them with everyone.
A bounded trial is supported by the stated interest and the existing session records, provided the named operational condition is met. Identify who provides supervision or maintenance and what each session will record. Preference and session use do not establish a broader benefit, so a stronger outcome claim requires a suitable evaluation. Quote the packet’s actual group and numbers rather than replacing them with everyone.
Marking criteria
Make an accurate claim that answers this question.
Locate relevant source evidence or identify the specified grammatical structure.
Explain the link between the evidence or structure and the conclusion.
Question 9 · 1 point
Which edit repairs a run-on while preserving the relationship?
The record was limited; the writer revised the claim.
The record was limited, the writer revised the claim.
Because the record was limited.
The record limited writer claim revised.
Worked answer
The record was limited; the writer revised the claim.
The record was limited; the writer revised the claim.
1 point for the correct objective answer; no written-method marks for this item.
Question 10 · 3 points
Revise this draft and explain one grammatical repair and one change in scope: “Because the record was quiet. The plan failed everyone knows it.”
Worked answer
Because the record showed few responses through one route, the writer could not yet judge the whole plan. The opening dependent clause now has a main clause, and the run-on no longer joins independent claims without a boundary. The revision narrows failure to the incomplete evidence rather than using an unsupported appeal to everyone’s knowledge.
Because the record showed few responses through one route, the writer could not yet judge the whole plan. The opening dependent clause now has a main clause, and the run-on no longer joins independent claims without a boundary. The revision narrows failure to the incomplete evidence rather than using an unsupported appeal to everyone’s knowledge.
Marking criteria
Make an accurate claim that answers this question.
Locate relevant source evidence or identify the specified grammatical structure.
Explain the link between the evidence or structure and the conclusion.
Question 11 · 1 point
A partner says the record is useless because it is incomplete. Which reply best advances the discussion?
Agree that no incomplete record can ever help.
Ask which question the record can answer and what additional evidence would address its limit.
Change the subject to the partner’s personality.
Invent a larger number to make the record impressive.
Worked answer
Ask which question the record can answer and what additional evidence would address its limit.
Ask which question the record can answer and what additional evidence would address its limit.
1 point for the correct objective answer; no written-method marks for this item.
Question 12 · 3 points
Plan a short presentation about one paper source. State the audience and claim, describe one labeled visual and give a fair response to a skeptical question.
Worked answer
For a family or club audience, explain what the chosen record actually counts and why its denominator matters. Label a chart with the source, group, outcome and sessions; describe the information aloud. If asked about all residents or an unmeasured benefit, acknowledge that the evidence does not answer it and name an appropriate next observation. A response should preserve the questioner’s actual concern rather than caricature it.
For a family or club audience, explain what the chosen record actually counts and why its denominator matters. Label a chart with the source, group, outcome and sessions; describe the information aloud. If asked about all residents or an unmeasured benefit, acknowledge that the evidence does not answer it and name an appropriate next observation. A response should preserve the questioner’s actual concern rather than caricature it.
Marking criteria
Make an accurate claim that answers this question.
Locate relevant source evidence or identify the specified grammatical structure.
Explain the link between the evidence or structure and the conclusion.
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